"Nonsense and beauty have close connections."
Maybe make the font a tiny bit bigger? It's just a little hard to read.
Out of the blue phase, and into dark and brooding, eh? Seriously, it's much more Brett than the tranquility thing.
G.I. Joe, a real American hero...You did say you wanted to know. And knowing is half the battle!
I don't know, Brett, perhaps I see a different you than everyone else... but this, THIS is just not you.Okay, maybe the blue was a bit tranquil for a young, capable man in his twenties... but this template here is terribly reserved... restricting...aw hell, it's downright suffocating!Try something bold, but too loud and tacky... something fun, but not too wacky... and something that deserves respect - for all good writers deserve respect!! :-)
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